Altrael, King of Blades

[PyrasTerran]

Name: Altrael, King of Blades

Species: Divine Chaos Spawn

Stats:

HT: 130 meters
WT: 300,000 tons

Land speed: 470 mph(approx. 940 kph)
Airspeed: Mach 8
Swim Speed: 150 knots

Description:




Combat Style: Altrael is cold and yet passionate, calm and yet furious. Altrael's greatest weapon on the battlefield is his mind. He is uncharacteristically smooth in any situation. He strangely never shows the outlandish ferocity of his chaotic father Chaos. When it comes to combat, he uses what is necessary and will stay in the game for as long as required. He is not too proud to back down if the odds are against him, so that he may live to kill another day. He usually lets the opponent attack as much as it wants so that he can examine his foe and its weaknesses, before he goes all out.

Qualities:
AT-Field - The Absolute Terror field, this is actually something that all humans have; it is what prevents us from looking into another person's mind, it is the field that protects our deepest darkest secrets from the minds of the world. Altrael, Being spawned from the heart of an angel, is able to generate this field into a force field to protect Altrael from anything but the most powerful of attacks(Although for the most part physical assaults are useless, and ethereal((holy, dark, and spirit)) attacks are completely deflected away from the shield). Erecting another shield next to it can cancel it out, as well as applying intense physical/energy pressure. Unlike what it's name might imply, attacking the shield physically does not result in terror. It is simply an almost impenetrable wall that neither Altrael nor the opponent can penetrate. Because Altrael's AT-field is so large, it also protects Sachiel from status-inducing attacks that involve eye-contact, gases, pollen, and the like. Altrael can also use the AT-Field as an attack by spreading it wide and quick enough that it slams into nearby opponents.

SS2 Organ - The 'super' heart of an angel, Should it ever break, Altrael will die. The red orb shown on Altrael's chest is only a superficial organ designed as a decoy. Altrael's upgraded S2 Organ is located deeper within his body, and is much, much smaller. It is located in Atrael's head, and as long as it is intact, it can bring back lost body parts, regenerate, etc.

Diamond Structure - Altrael's bones are very, very dense. As such, he is heavier, can take/deal more damage.

Forced Exemplar - Altrael's unique ability, an upgrade of Daegre's psychic link with Cindy, is the ability to sink deep into the mind of a sentient life form, and become linked. In this way, Altrael can extract power from his victim, making himself more powerful, as well as being able to see through the host's eyes. Altrael can do this with as many sentient beings as he wishes to cumulate his power. It is not mind-manipulation, but rather mind-assimilation, so only the most advanced mental barriers(mental-manip immunity) can detain the ability. However, since it is assimilation, the host is capable of seeing through Altrael's eyes if they train themselves to do so. Because of this side-effect, Altrael must choose his exemplars wisely.

DNA-drain - Altrael, when coming in touch-contact with an opponent, can absorb their DNA signatures and retain with them a special attack from their list. Altrael can only have 2 extra attacks at a time. If he wants a new one he will have to remove whatever attacks he had. The DNA stays in his body for a couple of hours before he loses the information.

Omni-transport - Besides being an adept swimmer, leaper and runner, Altrael is also capable of levitated flight.

Special Attacks:
Cross-heat Laser - An almost invisible beam that fires from Altrael's eyes. It produces big explosions that are in the shape of a cross. This attack does more damage to wards dark and holy beings.

Wrist-Spurs - The spears that are usually seen at the elbows of Altrael can shoot through the arm and out the top of the wrist, working very much like Irys' arm-blades, and are retractable. They can also be charged with particle energy to increase damage. This attack does more damage to wards dark and holy beings.

Energy orbs - small orbs of energy fired from Altrael's mouth or hands. They are rapid-fired, and create large explosions.

Kinetic-Form - Altrael's body is enveloped with energy, to the point that his body looks as if it were made of energy. In this mode, Altrael's body damages those who touch it with pulse discharges. Altrael does not use energy-based projectiles in this form.

Planekinesis - Altrael can control water and earth with his mind. It is not as advanced as Daegre or Sachiel's abilities(Where Daegre can generate volcanoes, Altrael is restrained to rocks and earth manipulation. Where Sachiel can generate water from the air, Altrael requires physical water present).

King of Blades - The ten virtually indestructible sharp protrusions on Altrael's back are detachable. They can move around in the air with Altrael's mind, or Altrael can grab them, using them like giant knives/swords/blades/daggers/scimitars. His tail can also generate a long energy sword. The blades can be charged with energy.

[reserved for borrowed attacks]
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Origin/History: Altrael is the product of an unspeakable act; the merging of the heart of an angel with the DNA of an avatar of Earth. Chaos' DNA is the glue that binds this twisted creature. However, the assimilation of something so divine as an angel produced some strange side-effects when Chaos spewed out his latest abomination. Rather than being as vicious, outgoing and maniacal as his chaotic father, Altrael was extremely passive. Chaos at first wondered if the experiment failed, but after seeing Altrael's combat capabilities he was certain it was no accident(at least power-wise). Despite being the most independent and opposing minion Chaos ever had, Altrael was also one of his deadliest. What they lacked in similarities in most everything, Chaos and Altrael made up for in lust for destruction and the kill. No one is aware of any other side-effects that Altrael was born with. However...


Pass: Fish are friends, not food.

[Shadow]

I guess my origin suggestion was good...
I think this is supposed to be in the pending kaiju section.

[PyrasTerran]

3 days.... and no comments. *sniff*

[OOZMan]

I think hes spiffy. You baby....

[Tarresque]

Once again, you're having the problem of over-powering the AT-Field. It's too strong, and has practically no drawbacks to it's usage. A field that can block everything, even the attacks of gods, has to have severe limitations in it's use. And remember that no matter what you say, some Kaiju posses attacks that clearly state they simply ignore the effects of fields and the like, and Altriel's isn't going to be an exception. One more note: Aura's are light-based. They pass through any kind of field, unless the field blocks incoming light, in which case Altriel would be encasing himself in darkness, and not able to see what he's attacking or where he's going.
I thought I already talked to you about this, but I am going to reiterate: creatures that are immune to mental influence are going to be immune to the Forced Exemplar ability. And yes, I know there aren't many creatures on the site at the moment who have such resistances, but it still must be stated.
The SS2 Organ seems to be his only weakness, and it's a sham at that. Nobody's ever going to be able to hit it if it can move itself around. Get rid of that ability, though you can keep it's reduced size.
Change the name of the DNA-Share ability, or give it a secondary effect. With a name like that, you'd think Altriel's target recieves some sort of effect as well.
Limit the effects of his Planekiniesis. Since his creation was supposedly an abomination, his control over unwilling elements isn't going to be as precise as his progenitors' were.
I know he's supposed to be a blending of Satchiel and Daegre, but you gave him practically all of their abilities at full power, with almost none of their weaknesses, or at least unique weaknesses of his own. Cut down on him. He can't fight everything effectively. No Kaiju can.

[PyrasTerran]

yay, recognition

Once again, you're having the problem of over-powering the AT-Field. It's too strong, and has practically no drawbacks to it's usage. A field that can block everything, even the attacks of gods, has to have severe limitations in it's use.

There are plenty of ways to smash it down. A well-charged Godzilla blast can penetrate it. Any other type of force-field can cancel it out. Continuously applying pressure on the field can also dispel it. Plus, once the AT-field is out, it's out for a good long while. One will note that once Sachiel's field was out of the picture he hasn't used it since.

And remember that no matter what you say, some Kaiju posses attacks that clearly state they simply ignore the effects of fields and the like, and Altriel's isn't going to be an exception.

I don't see how this challenges me or my sheet in any way.

One more note: Aura's are light-based. They pass through any kind of field, unless the field blocks incoming light, in which case Altriel would be encasing himself in darkness, and not able to see what he's attacking or where he's going.

s'not like Altrael can attack through the AT-field anyway. It's not a field that is always on like one of your kaiju's damn fields or auras, it must be activated consciously. But the AT-field is, regularly, the barrier that protects our minds. mind-readers, psychic, etc., are capable of going passing through these fields to an extent. if the field is as big as the body, then it becomes alot harder. But if Altrael is exposed to the aura before he knows what it is, then there's not much AT-fielding would do, now is there.

I thought I already talked to you about this, but I am going to reiterate: creatures that are immune to mental influence are going to be immune to the Forced Exemplar ability. And yes, I know there aren't many creatures on the site at the moment who have such resistances, but it still must be stated.

I know this already. I still don't see why I should be concerned.


DNA attack name changed, planekinesis limited, SS2 Organ movement changed. Though for the record, I never said Altrael was an abomination. I said he was an unspeakable act. In a sense, an evil perfection.

I know he's supposed to be a blending of Satchiel and Daegre, but you gave him practically all of their abilities at full power, with almost none of their weaknesses, or at least unique weaknesses of his own. Cut down on him. He can't fight everything effectively. No Kaiju can.

What do you think the 'However...' is supposed to signify?



With all due respect, I find your last sentence a bit hypocritical, Mr. enemies-can't-target-my-hyperion-ships'-weaponry-because-they-come-out-of-pocket-dimensions

[Tarresque]

There's a difference between Kaiju and spaceships, so quit splitting hairs, Mr. "I have plans set in stone for my Kaiju and they can't change them for anything".

And once again, you're playing ring-around-the-rosie with this AT-Field. State the limitations to it's usage on the sheet. Just because you and I know them doesn't mean everyone does. And I stand by what's been stated about auras. Nothing has to be changed on the sheet, I merely want you to make note of it.

Quote:And remember that no matter what you say, some Kaiju posses attacks that clearly state they simply ignore the effects of fields and the like, and Altriel's isn't going to be an exception.



I don't see how this challenges me or my sheet in any way.

It doesn't. I'm letting you know.

I know this already. I still don't see why I should be concerned.

It doesn't matter if it's your concern or not. It's mine. Fix it.

The SS2 Organ still has too much room to manuever. The entire head and torso regions? That's still an awfull lot of space. Confine it to somewhere specifically. A creature with as much power as Altriel, King of Blades, needs some very specific ways to harm it.
Please state the specific limitations of Altriel's kinetic abilities. Daegre and Satchiel were masters of their elements; just saying his aren't as advanced tells us little to squat about what he can do with them.
To be on the safe side, also give Altriel a handicap on his Kinetic-Form ability. Something like "no projectile attacks" or "severe drain on his reserves" should do fine. It just took me a moment to realize how strong that particular ability is.

I personally never said that you called Altriel an abomination, but that's just my speculation and opinion.

And as to the "However" part, before this gets Approved, you're gonna have to send PM's to the rest of the Admins so we know what you're going to be planning. After all, there's an extent as to how much of a surprise you can keep from the rest of the players, but Administrators need to know so we can plan the game accordingly.

This shouldn't be a debate. You wanted criticism so he could get approved, and here it is. Just make the changes, and we can get him moved.

[PyrasTerran]

There's a difference between Kaiju and spaceships, so quit splitting hairs, Mr. "I have plans set in stone for my Kaiju and they can't change them for anything".

The situation isn't so apples and oranges as you would make it seem, since Tarresque's protector form still comes to mind. But since he's a good guy, I guess it's alright then.

It doesn't matter if it's your concern or not. It's mine. Fix it.

Fix what? I've already stated that mental immunity can repel it since day one.

And as to the "However" part, before this gets Approved, you're gonna have to send PM's to the rest of the Admins so we know what you're going to be planning. After all, there's an extent as to how much of a surprise you can keep from the rest of the players, but Administrators need to know so we can plan the game accordingly.

Fair enough. But it's not like I'm the first person ever to make a kaiju who will have secrets later on.

This shouldn't be a debate. You wanted criticism so he could get approved, and here it is. Just make the changes, and we can get him moved.

Hey, you get to debate all you want when people dissapprove your characters the first times around, don't hog all the fun. At least I'm bothering to change things quickly rather than spin the topic around in 3 pages.

the SS2 organ, kinetic-form, planekinesis, AT-field all modded.

[Daemon]

Thought you had decided to abandon this character seeing to what my plans where?

[PyrasTerran]

I had later decided to keep him because i found an alternate solution to the dilemma.

[Daemon]

If it involves my character It better be discussed with me home fry.

[PyrasTerran]

it doesn't, jive turkey.

[Emissary]

This is pure bad-assery.

[Godzilla]

Trent, you need to PM the admins with this situation NOW. It's not gonna even be considered for approval if I don't know what its intended for. Minor kaiju is one this, MVC Kaiju are a whole 'nother ball game.

[Daemon]

pyrasterran said:

it doesn't, jive turkey.

Chaos makes him, it involves my character.