GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 7, 2005 16:04:57 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 7, 2005 16:04:57 GMT -5
Name: Daigan Species: Prehistoric Dragon Stats: HT: 180 meters WT: 150,000 metric tons Wingspan: 250 meters Landspeed: 200 kph. Aiprspeed: Mach 3 Swim Speed: 80 knots Description: Daigan has 3 terrifying heads, wings, muscular arms and legs, and a split tail. Combat Style: Daigan is extremely a monster to be feared. Daigan can withstand most energy attacks and takes hardly any damge from blunt attacks. And Daigan's Plasma beams are another part in Daigans deadly arsonal. Qualities: Juggernaut: With Daigan's sheer size and mass, Daigan can withstand most energy attacks. Demon Burn: Daigan summons flames from hell, an inferno demon of energy courses around Daigan like a tornado and then Daigan releases the inferno into his opponent. Regeneration - Daigan is able to slowly recover from small wounds and cuts. Larger flesh wounds can take up to several days. Levitation - Along with the use of his wings, Daigan's mind has enough psychic power to levitate his entire body or smaller objects around him. Special Attacks: Plasma Beam - Daigan's antlers begin to glow with energy and then fires a concentrated beam of energy from all three mouths. Super Plasma Beam - Daigan's body begins to glow with amazing energy and then from his middle head he fires a powerful concentrated beam of plasma into the opponent. Hurricane Winds - When Daigan is in battle he can flap his wings at a fast pace and cause hurricane like winds. Sonic Roar - Daigan's mouths can roar powerfully enough to create sonic, earsplitting waves. Origin/History: Daigan was a prehistoric dragon that had survived the mass extinction of the Cretaceous and soon went into a deep hibernation. Some sixty-five million years later an atomic bomb was dropped at the place he once roamed. The dragon was mutated with the atomic energies, changing his whole molecular structure. Two more heads protruded from Daigan's torso, creating a three-headed monstrosity. Now awaken, enraged from being awoken and hungry for flesh, he searches for prey in this strange modern world where daikaiju roam the earth. Pass: Victory Is Mine
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Daigan
Apr 7, 2005 16:16:50 GMT -5
Post by Psychozilla on Apr 7, 2005 16:16:50 GMT -5
Ghidorah already exists, and is not a dragon, but a demon. Explain that, please.
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Daigan
Apr 7, 2005 16:36:23 GMT -5
Post by Daemon on Apr 7, 2005 16:36:23 GMT -5
Damnit he beat me to it........ and to me his history seems kind of... sparse. flesh it out more. AND DON"T DELETE THIS ONE!!
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Daigan
Apr 7, 2005 17:47:52 GMT -5
Post by Gigan on Apr 7, 2005 17:47:52 GMT -5
Not only is the history sparse, it's also silly. The storytelling bit after his landing on Earth is unnecessary, that's what posting in the actual game is for. All the attacks and abilities aren't very descriptive, and he's not that strong for such a supposed badass.
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Daigan
Apr 7, 2005 19:08:20 GMT -5
Post by Zilla on Apr 7, 2005 19:08:20 GMT -5
this runes the kaiju i was going make
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GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 8, 2005 11:05:58 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 8, 2005 11:05:58 GMT -5
I am sorry I was in a hurry last night. I managed to modify some but I will finish the rest tonight when I have more time. Sorry.
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GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 11, 2005 16:09:19 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 11, 2005 16:09:19 GMT -5
Ok fixed it. Hopefully I got the History good.
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Daigan
Apr 11, 2005 16:34:32 GMT -5
Post by Gigan on Apr 11, 2005 16:34:32 GMT -5
Too much storytelling still. And now you've removed anything that gives us a basic idea of Daigan's origins, behavior, history, goals, all that sort of necessary information.
Read the bios of other approved kaiju to get a sense of what you need exactly.
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GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 12:44:15 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 15, 2005 12:44:15 GMT -5
Finally I fixed it. Thanx again for the advice Godzilla. I hope it is good. *keeping fingers crossed*.
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 12:58:41 GMT -5
Post by Godzilla on Apr 15, 2005 12:58:41 GMT -5
Your history is perfect. Now you just have to wait for Pyras or Gigans approval.
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 13:30:24 GMT -5
Post by Daemon on Apr 15, 2005 13:30:24 GMT -5
His history still seems to damn sparse to me. needs fleshing out aka MORE ADDED TO IT.
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 15:10:18 GMT -5
Post by Godzilla on Apr 15, 2005 15:10:18 GMT -5
We've passed kaiju with one sentance historys before. The thing is, this late in the game people don't really care where your kaiju came from, they care what its doing and what it's gonna do. *shrugs* I guess if you can add a bit more to it Daigan, that'd be cool. And your welcome, lol.
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GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 17:35:37 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 15, 2005 17:35:37 GMT -5
There I fixed it. Hope it's good.
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GojiLord
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 17:36:41 GMT -5
Post by GojiLord on Apr 15, 2005 17:36:41 GMT -5
Pyras, Gigan what do you think.
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Daigan
Apr 15, 2005 18:03:20 GMT -5
Post by Gigan on Apr 15, 2005 18:03:20 GMT -5
Ack, I was going to approve it earlier this afternoon, but had to do some other things and left. That history was just fine. But now you did the same storytelling nonsense, and it's actually worse...
*sigh* I'll fix it myself. After that, it'll be good to go.
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